Only really two things here.
Why does nobody Full View? A lot of times I have seen really crappy bits of art that when viewed at full are fantastic.
Why do people write descriptions that consist of purely "..." or "*"? How are we supposed to appreciate that your art represents the epic strugle of Coke v Pepsi if you never tell us that it IS Coke v Pepsi? Or even a battle? "Wow look at that, Coke is performing Kama Sutra to Pepsi! I want some!"

BAH! </misguided generic grumpyness>